Ivey (oc)

[Radie and Ivey Aire :)]

Name: Ivey Aire

Age: Kitten, 8

Gender: Queen

Tribe: Jellicles

Appearance: White kitten, with some black marks. Light blue eyes, long, fluffy tail, one paw with 5 toes. Birth defect O.o

Relationships: Blaze, Rebecca and Radie (blaze/rebecca approved by blaze)

Personality: Sweet, Kind, Caring. But if you do get on Ivey's bad side she can get sort of tough, for a kitten, but she is extremely nice. She is also very obsessed with singing.

Faults: Walks kind of funny, and has a strange part to her name that is Aire.(She thinks it's strange.) Ivey always wants things she can't have.

History: Her father died before she was born and her mom 1 day after. Ivey has been raised by Radie and Blaze for her whole life. She has some troubles walking, because she had some disfunction when she was born. She is only a kitten so that is the only important history.

Sample Post: Hi, I'm Ivey.

[Blaze]

Same with the comment on the application with Radie, (and use "Ivey/Radie walked", instead of "I walked") Oh, and for detail in the history, maybe you caould say "her father died of some sickness when her older sisters Blaze, and Radie were kittens, and her mother died when she was born.." maybe something like that, so you know about Blaze and Rebecca's life when they where kittens.

[Cafalle]

Blaze is right there. 'Hi, I'm Ivey.' isn't exactly a sample post. Just write something you would write in a roleplaying post, please.

[Radie and Ivey Aire :)]

(i used to rp on a different website where we didn't have to do this,and we could say I and really get into better character, no offence, srry :/) Ivey was staring at a rock. The rock looked like a star, she thought. She poked it.

[Cafalle]

Really the only reason we speak in third person is so that people can see the difference between RP chat and OOC chat. You can write in first person if you really want to, however.
Also, I fail to understand how someone who feels they can get into character can't write more than 3 sentences of history on said character. (no offence, I had a super hard time writing my first history )
Where did they live, what did Ivey think of her life? Did anything significant happen to her?
Other than all that, ACCEPTED!